Friday, January 6, 2012

Journal # 22

The snow falls down on to the childrens heads
To the park they go carrying their sleds

They like to go to sled during the day

It is better than staying in to play


They make their way on to the tallest hill
As they quickly slide down it is a thrill

They scream as they glide quickly to the ground
Everyone laughing and no one frowned

All day long they stay on top a sled
Untill its dark and cold and time for bed

They dream sweet dreams about the day they had
It all so wonderful and nothing bad

They see the sled moving downward so fast
But the day is not stuck in the past

Again they will go to that special hill
the wind hitting their face sending a chill

Untill tomorrow they will have to wait
To live another day it will be great

1 comment:

  1. Great Job Emma! I like your word choice and the use of iambic pentameter! Keep of the good poem! (:

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